Purpose: To inform my audience about why Rory Gilmore’s speech at her graduation is effective
Organizational Pattern: Topical
- Opening: [RHETORICAL QUESTION] How many of you remember what the valedictorian said at your graduation? [PAUSE]
- Don’t remember.
- Fictional character speech resonated
- [PLAY CLIP]
- quote word for word
- love show and speech.
- Rory Gilmore = fictional character.
- I relate to.
- Time in front of TV, not making own memories
- Character understand
- live in a world of books.
- people be characters in my reality.
- Very similar
- What would Rory do?
- Don’t remember.
- Rory was the girl that when she headed to school in the morning her backpack was so stuffed with books that she often couldn’t fit in her textbooks.
- She had multiple books. [Gilmore Girls Guide Season 2]
- Big part of her live
- Leave them out
- surprised.
- Allusions are memorable [Stylistic Devices]
- Books I want to read
- The world I enter
- The world she enters.
- Leo Tolstoy, Mark Twain and William Faulkner.
- famous authors.
- easily recognize and know the works of.
- Even the plot lines give away the title
- Allusions are successful
- Out of thin air
- Without them not so memorable
- She had multiple books. [Gilmore Girls Guide Season 2]
- Rory not only lived in this imaginative world, but she also had people play characters in the story of her life.
- Love and support no matter what.
- World I wish I lived in.
- Fiction to heartstrings
- Cried before
- Pathos. [Rhetoric Document, Aristotelian Appeals]
- Real and important
- Describes using metaphors
- Makes me think about own relationships
- Has my emotions & emotional connection [WATCH HAND GESTURES]
- In the speech mom’s a crying mess.
- Unbreakable emotional connection
- looking into my soul.
- calling me out on my actions
- Her use of pathos is effective
- Love and support no matter what.
- Rory Gilmore may be made-up, but if I were valedictorian at my school, I would try to reword this speech to make it mine.
- you don’t forget.
- I haven’t forgotten
- [PARALLELISM] When I’m in need of a good cry, I turn it on. [PAUSE]
- [PARALLELISM] When I miss my mom, I turn it on. [PAUSE]
- [PARALLELISM] When I wish that things were different, I turn it on. [PAUSE]
- character that I won’t forget.
- Relationship with her mother
- No fighting and does everything together
- Single mom and her teenage daughter [Gilmore Girls Profile]
- Discover how they grew together.
- I can relate to the life that Rory lives
- [STORY] episode where Rory goes away to college.
- Calls mom.
- I didn’t do that.
- you don’t forget.
- Closing
- My world has books and real characters
- Sums up what my life was like through high school.
- I may not remember what my valedictorian said, but I will always remember what Rory Gilmore, and not just at her graduation, but in all seven seasons of the show.